in the holiday by Cyrus

First in the holiday my family went to minigolf 'lost in time ' near Aoetea square ,there was 4 stages .world 1 ,gold mine ,forest of unknown and stone age .Our challenge was to hit the less to get it in the hole ,Our mum won next we went to jump it was so fun Peyton (our little brother was jumping then he landed his face luckily he didn't cry otherwise we would be at home .I was very grateful ! Lastly when we got home i played on mt tablet .i played jet pack joyride  ,its about  a man who stole a  machine gun jet pack ,i obtained 180 coins in a game ! i brought the bubble jet pack and then i played more games!