The Alien Genie
is a Alien but a Genie at the same time. Alien Genie can make people’s dreams
come true. To get him you have to rub his lamp. He can also turn into stuff. He
is light blue and has 3 eyes. He also has 3 eyes. He also has a brown tail like
a beaver. He is special because he is kind and helping .
He lives in a cave and he like eating fruit.
Your story is the best one I heard but there are some mistakes. One of them said he has 3 eyes two times and he like eating fruit instead of he likes eating fruit.
ReplyDeletebut I liked your little alien genie and his little cow. We really loved your story.
By Namrata and Madison From b4
Thank for the really nice comment.Do you like eating fruits?
DeleteBy Zee
Your descriptive piece of writing is good. I especially like your simile "he also has a brown tail like a beaver"
ReplyDeleteWhaea Suzanne FPS
B11 F.P.S Tinatasha
ReplyDeleteAmazing work Zee, I like it on how you said that the alien genie has blue skin, blue eyes and he has a tail like a beaver.QUESTION: Would the alien genie have any friends? You are so creative Zee and I hope you have a wonderful day.