Friday, 10 March 2017

Double blade fly


It is a fast flying monster that can’t even scratch.
It can walk as slow as a snail and it even has spikes that can stick on walls. The tail wiggles when there is danger but never has wiggled it can see backwards and  forwards because it has to be ready when there is danger . The double blade can smell from far far away and lives in a house that a human lives in .

                                                                                                             


2 comments:

  1. i like the way you are learning to use descriptive language. I think it would have been better if you had started with a name. what do you mean the spike can stick on walls?

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    1. Thanks Mrs Ramesh for commenting on my creature. It can
      stick on walls because the sharp bit has got super glue to
      make it stick without people knowing. By Jazzlyn

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