Friday, 5 May 2017

Chipmunks by Jazzlyn

On the holidays me and my family went to chipmunks with my cousin sister. We were going in the slide and when we went down a girl kept on following me so I went on the gigantic park. I kept on going up and up until I ended up in a dead end. The girl found me so I went into the slide. I thought that it would be slow but it went so fast, that I started screaming so loud. I was so glad that it was over. Then I said I never ever go on that slide ever again.


6 comments:

  1. Hi Jazzlyn that was an amazing story because you said that you were screaming so loud.I would like to go there some day and go on the gigantic slide and scream.I like going to the Rainbows-End.What was you favorite slide?By Mattia.

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  2. Hi Jazzlyn I love how you said you went on the gigantic park it must be big. Why did you go to the chpmunk? By Anne

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  3. Thanks for commenting on my post Mattia. I am Warning you do not go on that slide first you will stop then go again then stop and fall fast as lightning but you are aollwed to go if you want. By Jazzlyn

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  4. Thanks for commenting on my post Anne. I went to Chipmunks for my holidays because we never go anywhere. By Jazzlyn

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  5. Hi my name is pearl
    I liked your story .
    I WISH I COULD GO TO THE MOVIES BUT I HAD TO DO CHURCH STUFF!!!

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  6. Hi my name is pearl
    I liked your story .
    I WISH I COULD GO TO THE MOVIES BUT I HAD TO DO CHURCH STUFF!!!

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