The best holiday ever
In the first week of the holidays,
We went to the Easter Show. When we got there we went to have
something to eat. My mum gave me, my two brothers and my auntie twenty dollars
each. We went on the Ferris wheel and we play games. My brothers won a five nights at Freddy
toy. We got some candy floss and we went
home early because suddenly my brother fell down and twisted his ankle when we
got home we put an ice-pack on his ankle and gave him an ice block to help him get better .He started to vomit so we
took him to the hospital. The doctor said he just ate too much food and did not
drink enough water. We went to my aunties house and we all fell asleep. J
I really liked how you said you got candy floss and how you helped your brother with his ankle. What did you eat?BY Paige
ReplyDeleteThanks paige yeah now my brother is all better and before we went home we ate MC Donald. By Alyana
ReplyDeleteHello Alyana I really enjoyed reading your story,I liked the part when you said you went on Ferris wheels beacuse that sounds like alot of fun i wish i could go on the Ferris wheel.What was your favourite part.By:Jessica
ReplyDeleteHi Alyana I feel sad for your brother I hope he is ok and I wish I could help and come with you, your story sounds fun and sad. Which game or ride did you do first?
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