Friday, 5 May 2017

Mangere Mountain By Halana

On  Mangere mountain  park  I was  playing  basketball  with my  mum,  saint, and me. That’s  when  mum went to go get some KFC for my family to eat.  It was an amazing day.


6 comments:

  1. I liked your story
    by Ihaiah

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  2. Dear Halana
    I loved your story and how you used your 5w's in your story.I always go to Manger Mountain with my family on Saturdays and train but sometimes play around in the park.Did your dad go with you guys?
    By:Tupe

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  3. wow halana i liked how you said you were playing basketball with your mum and saint. How many times have you been to Mangere Mountain park?By:
    Alyana

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  4. I like your story.
    I like KFC too.
    I dont know what you eat

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  5. Hi Halana do you love KFC i do whats your favourite food. by Madison

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  6. Hi Halana Where were you playing at. Whats your favorite BB Team. By Fuapau

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