Friday, 7 April 2017

The Mangere Market by Alyana

the mangere market IS FULL OF LOUD MUSIC PLAYING. THERE ARE YELLOW SUNSHINE BANANAS WAITING TO BE EATEN. BROWN FRESH AND CLEAN POTATOES IN THE HOT STEAMY SUN WAITING TO BE BROUGHT TOMATOES THAT YOU CAN ADD TO YOUR COOKING. RED AND PINK KUMARAS THAT EVERYONE LOVES. LOTS OF CUSTOMERS BUYING SALTY HOT CHIP. PEOPLE DRINKING COLD ICED DRINKS. THEIR ICE-CREAM DRIPPING DOWN THEIR CONES PEOPLE CHATTERING AND TALKING.

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  1. Anonymous11 April 2017 at 10:07

    Hi Alyana your story is so amazing because I like the part that says there are yellow sunshine bananas waiting to be eaten. I wish I'd been to the Mangere market and saw people drinking cold iced drinks and buying salty hot hot chips. Where is the Mangere market? By Peti

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    1. Anonymous5 May 2017 at 10:40

      Thanks Peti for the comment i like that part to. the market is near the Mangere town Centre . By Alyana

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  2. Nardi1 May 2017 at 10:14

    thank you for sharing your thoughts about the Mangere Markets. It has been a while since I made an early morning trip for their delicious foods. Looks like I'm due for a visit.

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    1. Anonymous5 May 2017 at 09:59

      Thank you miss Lenard i hope i see you there Too By Alyana

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  3. S Brandon2 May 2017 at 08:54

    Hi Alyana,
    That was a wonderful story because we could see the people you were describing at the markets in your story. Some of us have not been to the Mangere Markets but we want to go and see what is so special now. Did you go to the markets with your family or with your class. Comments by Margaret, Exodus, Rizma, Zeeyaan.

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    1. Anonymous5 May 2017 at 10:46

      Thanks Margaret Exodus Risma and Zeeyaan i hope i see you there and yes i have been there with my family to buy some hot food i hope you go there to . By Alyana

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  4. Anonymous4 May 2017 at 09:14

    Hi Alyana, your story was amazing I like the details you added to your story!I wish I could go to the Mangere market with you.
    By Malayah and Jalierus

    By Malayah and

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    1. Anonymous5 May 2017 at 10:50

      Thanks Malayah and Jalierus i hope i can go to the Mangere MARKET with you to.BY Alyana

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  5. Anonymous4 May 2017 at 09:21

    Hi Alyana, your the best story teller in the world because you added lots of details to your amazing story we wished we went to the Mangere Market with you.
    By Jalierus and Malayah B4

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    1. Anonymous5 May 2017 at 10:54

      Thanks Jalierus and Malyah I think i am a great story teller to i still wish i would meet you in person. By Alyana

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  6. B11 Finlayson Park School22 August 2017 at 09:59

    F.P.S B11 Kate
    Hi Alyana that was a beautiful story, I couldn't have written it better. I would like to ask you some questions, what inspired you, when did you go and what is your favourite stall to go to? The music stall, the book stall, the food stall, the ice-cream stall or the jewelery stall, witch one?

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