Friday, 7 April 2017

The Mangere Market By Cyrus

The Mangere market was beautiful there was so much stuff! Discs, food, toys, tools .The red long kumara was laying down in the super-hot sun.  The radishs were piled up on each other lucky not to get burnt. The bananas were dazzling in the lava hot sun Cars beeping in the distance because of the traffic. The smell of fresh churos and kebabs. The green cauliflower ready to be taken and eaten. Humans in stores waiting for money
By Cyrus



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  1. Anonymous11 April 2017 at 10:21

    Hi I like your blog it was amazing. I liked the words that you used. What food do you like the best? By Nevaeh



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    1. Anonymous14 August 2017 at 10:59

      my favorite food at the markets is churros

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  2. S Brandon2 May 2017 at 09:10

    Hi Cyrus,
    We thought your story was fantastic because you included lots of detail in your writing. What is you favourite food at the market?
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    1. Anonymous28 November 2017 at 09:16

      i like the delicious churros

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  3. Anonymous7 June 2017 at 09:51

    Hi Cyrus I like your discribing words. My favoourite green vege is caulyflower. Whats your any kind of favourite vege?By Akshath

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  4. B71 August 2017 at 08:21

    good story


    chase

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