Thursday, 6 April 2017

The Mangere Market by Jazzlyn

The Mangere market is full with people. The yummy shiny yellow bananas and the smelly yucky onions. Island music is booming through the market. The Smell of hot burning kebabs and the hot chips fill the air. Noisy people chatter in their language.









6 comments:

  1. Hi Jazzlyn I thought your story was lovely and amazing. I liked how you used wow words. I've been to the Mangere markets and I also heard the booming music. How did you feel when you heard the loud booming music? serenity

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  2. Hi Jazzlyn I thought your story was amazing! I liked the way you said the smelly yucky onions. I agree onions are smelly. Why did you go to the Mangere markets?


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  3. Hi Jazzlyn, You paint a picture with your words of the markets really well. Which Language do you speak in at the markets?

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  4. thanks for commenting on my post I speak English. What language do you speak at the markets. By Jazzlyn

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  5. Thanks for commenting on my post I go to the Markets because we have to buy stuff to eat. By Jazzlyn

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  6. Thanks for commenting on my post I like it how the booming music goes through the markets. By Jazzlyn

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