The
Mangere Market
The
Mangere market was full with magnificent and colour full fruit and vegetable’s.
The bananas don’t look like normal bananas they look like magical bight
bananas. The potatoes look as tan as a humans’ skin. I think the market smells
like the fresh vegetable and fruit but sometimes when I went pass the people
their under arm smells stinky. The cauliflower look as green as a salad. I
might hear some cars rushing to work and people chatting.
I love your work about the Mangere market and how you said that the potatoes look like they were as tan as human skin. Why did you write about the Mangere market? by David
ReplyDeleteHi Anne I like how you wrote your story because of the yummy fruit and vegetables.I like how you said that the bananas dont look like the normal ones. Whats your favourite fruit and vegetable? by Tutai
ReplyDeleteHi Anne I like how you written your story because it has a lot of delicious food and fruit.My favourite fruit is apple like red silk.
ReplyDeleteWhat is your favourite food and fruit.By:Joshua
Hi Anne
ReplyDeleteWe liked your story because your story is funny. We thought that you used some great words like magnificent, magical, and stinky. What is your favourite fruit and vegetable?
Comments by Rizma, Margaret, Zeeyaan, Exodus
I like the way you used detail words like smelly,stinky and colourful also your story was so funny.
ReplyDeleteBy Devine and Caitlin B4
Thanks for the comment guys now I'm super happy well my favourite fruit is apple my favourite vegetable is carrot By Anne
ReplyDeletethanks for commenting on my post David. I wrote about the Mangere market because we were learning to discribe the Mangere market. By
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