The Mangere
Markets are full of lots of delicious yummy food, vegetables and fruits. All
the customers are ready to buy them. The bananas are sitting there like golden
eggs waiting until they hatch. The potatoes burning like an oven because of the
sun. The Kumara are as red as blood dripping down your leg. The people in the
market can see green lettuce that are as green as the grass. The bananas are as
yellow as the sun and the potatoes are as brown as a tree trunk. If I were
there I would have smelt fresh, delicious food.
Makoe, I would love to come with you to the markets. You paint such a vibrant picture of what the markets are like.
ReplyDeleteHi Suzanne, thank you for the comment. I enjoyed writing about the market. By Makoe
ReplyDeleteHi Makoe I liked your story about The Mangere markets. I liked the way you said the kumara are as red as blood dripping down your leg.Your story really made me hungry and my tummy rumble. What is your favorite food? By Rau
ReplyDeleteDear Makoe,I liked how you wrote that the bananas are sitting there like golden eggs,one time my sister got a twin banana and she ate it,Have you eaten a twin banana before? By Rosalia.
ReplyDeleteHi Makoe
ReplyDeleteI liked it when you added descriptive language.
I also think that the banana looks like the yellow sun.
What is your favorite market?
From: Preston and Nofo
HI Rau, i bet you are really hungry, i hope you get to write about the market one time. Thanks for the comment.
ReplyDeleteHi Rosalia, i hope you liked my story, and no i have never eaten a twin banana before. I think i might want to eat it sometime soon. Thank you for the comment.
ReplyDeleteHi Preston and Nofo, i hope you really enjoyed my story and my favorite market is the mangere markets. Thank you for the comment.
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