Friday, 7 April 2017

The Mangere Market by Paige

The Mangere market has loads of beautiful, colourful fruit and vegetables. The fresh white cauliflowers float like a cloud in the sky. The sound of lovely slow island music fills the air, and people having a conversation together. Delicious smell of hot chips, with tomato sauce and kebabs. The felling of ice cold drinks satisfies my thirst.
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  1. Nardi1 May 2017 at 10:19

    I have always thought it is a beautiful sight when there is a variety of colourful fruit and vegetables on display. Love your descriptive vocabulary.

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    1. Anonymous10 May 2017 at 09:59

      Thank you Miss leonard for loving my work.By Paige

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  2. Anonymous1 May 2017 at 10:24

    Dear Paige, I liked your writing because it had so many amazing adjectives,when I go to the market it always sounds wonderful what is your favourite food? by Sophia

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    1. Anonymous10 May 2017 at 09:54

      Thank you for commeting on my post. My favorite food is butter chicken.By Paige

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  3. Anonymous4 May 2017 at 09:11

    Paige this is amazing how you used so many descriptive words it was so satisfying I always wanted to write a story like that by Aarav and Aretaseta by B4

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    1. Anonymous20 October 2017 at 10:31

      Thank you Aarav and Aretaseeta for commenting on my post I really want to see your story. By Paige

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  4. Anonymous4 May 2017 at 09:24

    Hi my friend and I liked your writing and how you were talking about all well most off the food in the market by heather and alisha

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