The Mangere market looks like the banana were old
and it smells like dog poo. The yellow banana shone like the sun
coming down. All the colours of the market made it looks colourful. But when you go to
the Mangere market it is so noisy and you will not hear the island music
because people will be laughing too much.
Hi Amazon I was amazed at your work and I loved that you said "all the colours of the market looks colourful. When the sun shines on a banana I like to grab and eat them because bananas are my favourite fruit. What kind of island music do you like?
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My name is Nofo. Your work is cool. My favourite colour is red too. I like when you said the Mangere market looks like the bananas were old and it smells like dog poo. Do you go to Mangere market on Saturday?
ReplyDeleteHi Amazon, We liked your story because it was funny and made us all laugh, including the teacher. Do the Mangere Markets really smell like dog poo or did you include this in your story to make us laugh?
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I liked the way you described the setting around you.What was your
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By Gaby and Maranique B4
Wow Amazon I liked how you said the Banana swelled like dog poo That is so funny.Have you been to Mangere Markets?By Alyana
ReplyDeleteI'm in b4 and u like that smell
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Hi Amazon I liked how you used similes by Aretaseta
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